Ask about her.”-Roman Griffen"Brad drops the conversational ball with the 'What did you think of it? He’s got to give her something to engage with."-Sandra Lamb“He starts off well because he volunteers info about himself, but I’d like him to add more before he asks another question.
Knowing that he’s willing to give and take will show that he’s more serious about getting to know who I am.”-Alicia, 30, Philadelphia“I don’t learn all that much about Brad, but he seems cautiously optimistic and interested. A.“I think this is a good format for an introductory email, but this one is bland.
;-)Hope to hear from you.-Kim The feedback:“It’s a bit lengthy for an initial response but it’s interesting, not the norm. It’s creative, fun to read, and I love the ending.”-Roman Griffen“Kim’s adjectives are all very general. If I were the recipient, however, I might want to hear more about how she connected with any of the various points I’d made in my profile.”-Evan, 31, Exton, PA“This writer gives me a variety of conversation-starters to help the first date flow.
After all, what you write will directly impact that person’s impression of you—and whether they write back. To help answer that very question, we got five online daters to submit emails they’d sent to objects of their affection.
So please tell me it’s true before he makes me do something drastic, and I’ve already been warned that if there are any more incidents like the Swan Lake monkey-banana night of last week I’ll be banned from the store.-Eric The feedback:“This email is creative, maybe too cute. ’ and make it a statement instead: ‘I really find it cool that you enjoy reading Nabokov...’ And instead of ‘The little man that runs my brain....,’ I would simply say, ‘How could I not respond?
I hope it is—the little man who runs my brain has taken over and made me send you a note.
Then our panel of experts and peers weighed in with their opinions. S.: Some of these emails were successful, some weren’t... ) So embarrassing, I just knocked my coffee all over the place cause my cell phone was ringing and I was trying to type and grab it at the same time. A woman who reads Nabokov (I just finished Lolita), likes Al Green and is really attractive as well?